中考英语高分作文秘籍:8招写好“凤头豹尾”

2017-07-24 18:11:22

人们常说写作文要有“凤头豹尾”,就是说作文的开头要写得像凤凰的头一样引人瞩目,而结尾要像豹尾那样刚毅有力、戛但是止。那么,怎样让本人的作文具有“凤头豹尾”呢?下面笔者针对不同的文体和题材对英语作文的开头和结尾的写作办法停止了归结总结。

  一、怎样写好文章的开头

  开头是作文在阅卷教师面前的第一次亮相,它将决议你所写的文章在阅卷教师心中所留下的第一印象。假如第一印象好,就意味着有了良好的开端,也就胜利了一半。Good beginning is half done,(江门补习社)我们该怎样一提起笔就让本人胜利一半呢?

  (一)“开门见山”式开头

  普通来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的言语引出文章的话题,使人一开端就能理解文章要阐明的内容。

  1. 关于叙事类的文章,能够在开头把人物、时间、事情和环境交代分明。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头能够是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

  2. 关于阐述性的文章,能够在开头处先说明本人的观念,接着展开进一步的阐述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头能够是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……

  (二)回想性开头

  在描绘事情或游记类的文章中,采用回想性的开头常常更能吸收人的眼球。这品种型的开头中通常含有描绘本人心情或心情的词汇,如never forget 

(永远无法遗忘), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人冲动的),surprising(令人诧异的), sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

  (三)疑问性开头

  在叙事类或阐述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既能够吸收阅卷者的留意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头能够是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

  再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头能够是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

  (四)倒叙式开头

  在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,能够采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事情的结果,再陈说过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头能够这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.


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